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    November 22

    Poetry writing course: exercise eight

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    The door slightly opens
    Out dimly radiating
    The light, and shadows
    Floating on the wall
     
    Slowly zooming you in
    The white hot light
    Soughing leaves beaming above
    Silver path winding beneath
     
    Summoning from distance
    The Duet, Soar to the azure
    Diminishing in the air
    Fading, in the memory

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    ramona l'wrote:
    时差...时差...时差...对我没效果,今早的上传,呵呵呵。
    太忙了,所以前两周都懒了,这次一下都贴上来~
    Nov. 22
    政 董wrote:
    呵呵,刚才还只看到你贴的那篇20分钟习作,回头发现忽然又冒出两篇!今早的惊喜:)
    Nov. 22

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