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    October 16

    Poetry writing course: exercise three

    Scheherzade of Rimsky-Korsakov
     
    Billows tilting up and sinking down
    To the heave of the melodious dawn
    Equally with the rhythm of my heart
    Where Violin overflows like a dart
    Trembling and sobbing
    Melancholic like my heart
     
    Through the golden blurry bright
    Sparkling is the radiating light
    I shun from the real saying
    Escaped from my inner being
    Scared its keen subtle sensation
    Slumping into deeper desolation
     
    My heart weeping, to the
    Nostalgic tune’s exhaling
    Gigantic strings like the vast woods
    The immense silence reveals the secret truth
    The clarinet gliding, the wind sliding
    The safe light of warming
    Under which stones solemnly frolicking
    On the dry soft field of the woods
     
    I sail; glistening is the sea
    Shivering wind circles salty moist
    And sunlight pokes grayish mist
    Drops of the light trickle down
    Into the chromatic transparency
     
    My heart weeping, to the
    Nostalgic tune’s exhaling
    The truth in the memory
    The trace in the age-old imagery
    I take on my grand black frock
    Treading to the horizontal drippy sun
    My head lowering in the gown
    A divot of Primrose, a piece of sky
    The ancient sight
    My soul is there
     
    The woods tilting up and sinking down
    To the heave of my heart’s core
    Deep in the forest are the remote echoes
    With the clarinet gliding, the wind sliding
    And the safe light of warming
    Stones solemnly frolicking
    On the dry field of the woods
    I soar up to the azure,
    Hovering and looking down
    Transcending every dawn
    I am free, in a splendid realm
     
     

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    ramona l'wrote:
    真的是过奖了,汗颜,这些都是每周的作业,在修这门课而已,完全是初学者的做作风格,莫笑话,呵呵。
    Oct. 21
    看来你对诗歌很有研究啊。
    Oct. 17

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